Thursday, August 19, 2010

Luseane's Fanfiction

                                                                                        YOUNG AND AFRAID!

I wrote my fanfiction based on the movie "The Lovely Bones" Directed by None other than New Zealand's own Peter Jackson (2009). 

I do not own The Lovely Bones, I'm just writing my piece of fanficiton based on Suzie Salmons murder and the thoughts running through her mind at the time leading to her death.
This is my first fanfic I've written I hope you enjoy it.




My lifeless body laid still once my murderer slammed me to the floor. Winded from the impact of the fall he gently covered my mouth so that my empty screams could not be heard. Instantly I felt a sharp pain go through my body followed by a strange warmth. My murderer had stabbed me and was putting an end to my life before it even had the chance to begin. What was I to do? But to lie there like a dead log and shiver from the coldness of my tears. This so-called human being that I had trusted enough to follow was now deciding whether i was to live and see another day or die. Looking into my eyes he reassured me "everything was going to be alright" but at the meantime I was getting closer to my fate, like the hour glass the sand falling on to the other side was representing a memory I had ever owned slipping away before me. Death was near and I could feel it.

"Why me?" I faintly whispered. "You are not like other girls Suzie, you are different and I know it. I've been watching you for a while and have longed for this moment." Tears shot down from my big blue eyes and rested on my pink Rosie cheeks. Who was this monster? and who was he to rob me of my innocence and a chance at love? As my head spun back to reality I noticed my murderer standing over me with a smirk on his aging face doing the unimaginable with his eyes. I felt disgusted wishing that this was all bad dream, but it wasn't! It was the beginning of my nightmare. My worn out body was fuming and all I wanted to do was get up and show this THING the same sympathy he was showing me. Looking from left to right like a crazy person I noticed something glistening in the dark. It was a piece of broken glass! with the last bit of strength I had left in my system I reached for the glass then plunged at my murderer aiming for his face. With so much rage he let out a yell (that should have woken up atleast one neighbour) and demolished everything in his way striking me three times in the head also. At least that's how many hits I had counted before blacking out...


A fainted light started to arise slowly and was now the only thing I could see besides darkness, was this heaven? The smell of mashed potatoes and vegetables started to fill the small room and was now unblocking my senses. I thought I had died and was released from my bad dream but that was not the case. Worn out and bruised I looked up to see my murderer sitting across from me eating with a bandage across his face. Covering what I had done to him. which somehow made death for me a tad sweeter!

Visions of my parents and siblings started flooding into my head. Had they realised I was not home and it was beyond my curfew? The world was continuing to turn as normal while mine stood still and I was trapped with a stranger who had no life. Once again my washed out eyes continued to drop like a waterfall. When was this going to end? what did I do to deserve this? I had obeyed my parents and done everything they wanted! why was i getting punished? all these thoughts and memories of the ones I had loved started to make my head pound with such an insane rush that it felt ready to explode. I was wishing and hoping for someone to walk through the cornfield and answer my prayers but that became another disappointment and I realised my last moments on this earth was going to be with this man who played God with my life. Everything was spinning and starting to close in on me. My breaths were getting shorter and my eye lids were heavy and difficult to keep open.

This was it, my hour glass was emptying out and I was relieved at the thought of it. Looking at my murderer in the eyes for the very last time I saw a man lost in his own world trapped and uncertain of what to do in life. I inhaled my last breath and closed my eyes, a mini slide show of my family and the love of my life Ray appeared and comforted me in my last moments. All the pain and hurt i felt was now numb and I was at peace knowing that the place I was going to my murderer wouldn't be there to hurt me anymore. "My name is Salmon (like the fish), first name Suzie. I was 14 years old when I was murdered on December 6th 1973".

Saturday, August 14, 2010

Bita's fanfiction



About Elly is a Persian movie, which is winner of silver bear from Berlin's film festival for the best director. winner of the best movie in Trebika film festival, winner of best movie, best director, best voice and candidate to received ten golden bird from 27th of fajr movie festival. 

Narrative of few families traveling to north of Iran for three days holiday, the reason of this trip is the old friend came back from Germany to Iran for a while. In this trip Sepideh invited (Elli) who is her daughter"s kindergartner teacher to meet the Ahmad, but suddenly in the second day Elly disappears and all the happiness become dark..

Sepideh, Amir, Morvarid (4years old)
Shohreh, Peyman (Arash 5years, Arezou 3years)
Nazi, Manouchehr
Ahmad
Elly and Ali

After arriving to Ramsar (north of Iran), they went to the water front motel has been reserved for them. Night passed with playing pantomime, and snacks.
In the morning after eating breakfast, Sepideh and Shohre left home for shopping. Elly, Nazi and men stayed at home. Elly was playing kite with Arash, after few minutes, Morvarid was calling, come come, arash Arash
drowning drowning...
everybody were running to sea, after 10 minuts Ahamad found Arash. Arash was unconscious, 5minuts passed, Arash has back to life again. Nobody knew Elly was in the sea too, to save Arash, Arezou said she saw her with Arash in the water. now Sepideh and Shohre came back. all of them and divers were looking for Elly , but they coulden't find her.

Sepideh was keep saying to herself, why I forced her to come with us?
 After all every one looked at Sepideh, they knew she should take a responsibility to tell Elly's family; but Sepideh didn't know anything about Elly, she just met her in the kindergartner. Sepideh made every one crazy after saying these words, Amir (husband) was so mad at her. Elly's phone was ringing, Sepideh pick the phone up, It was Ali Elly's fiance. everyone was shocked. Elly didn't tell anything about him because she didn't like him, and was regret to marry him.
Ali came to Ramsar because he found it out Elly was there to meet Ahmad.
after few hours police called them to go to hospital to identify the body. Elly being drowned, and divers found her body under the sea. 







 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lrYhdbrr_A0

If I was in writer place I would writ...( About Elly)

Three families planed to go to North of Iran (Ramsar) for their holiday and for their single friend Ahmad, who came from Germany to Iran for a while. Sepideh asked her friend to go with them. On the way they stopped beside the river to have a break and lunch, Ahmad was looking at Elly sometimes and think she seems beautiful and an attractive girl. Elly wasn't noticed about Ahmad, she didn't know him, she only knows Ahmad doesn't live in Iran and this trip is because of him to visit the city. Elly had someone in her life but she didn't tell Sepideh. Elly was a deep person, she doesn't talk much.
everybody were asking about life style in Germany. Sepideh walked to the car to bring something, Elly walked after her. do you like him? Sepideh said.
who? what?? Elly said.
Sepideh: Ahmad
Oh I wasn't notice of him, Elly said to Sepideh.
Elly: Is he single??
Yes he is, I'm looking for someone for him, Sepideh said with naughty smile.
Elly walked away to river side, she needed some space. she didn't know what to do. It was for long time that she had plan to go to Europe but she couldn't get visa for some reason. Now there is some people to take her there. she was busy thinking, Sepideh called her for lunch.
They got in the car to go to water front motel which they booked.
Ahmad and Elly moved to Sepideh and Amir's car, children got in Nazi's car.









They reached the villa, everybody had something to carry, Elly was busy with her phone. seems like there is something wrong. has mobile reception here? Elly asked.
hmmmm I don't think so honey, Sepideh said. 
They got into the villa, everyone got their room, to change their cloths and fresh up. Elly went out side, Ahmad followed her. Do you wanna be alone? Ahmad said.
''No no it's OK''. Elly said.
They walked to beach, Ahmad light the cigarette. can I have one? Elly said.
Ahmad: ''sure''
Ahmad: ''are you single''?
Elly: ''naughty smiled. Yes I am.''
Ahmad: ''me too''
They both were looking to the sea. Elly was looking deep far, seems like she is not there, she stopped puffing her cigarette, but Ahmad regularly puffs, he was begins conversation with her. 
Ahmad: ''I'm so sick of living in Germany alone, I want to make my life actually, with a girl. at the first sight I liked you, If you feel the same, we can keep in touch''.
Elly: ''och.. my finger''.
Ahmad got closer to her, what happened? 
''cigarette, Elly said''. 
Elly: ''it's OK''. 
Ahmad: ''did you hear me''?
Elly: ''yes we can get to know each other''.
Ahmad smiled.
Ahmad: ''shall we go in''? 
Elly: ''oh no, I stay''. 
Children got out to play, people were playing cards inside. Elly was sitting on the rock and thinking far.
suddenly she look into water, It was Arash, he was drowning. Elly jumped into the water, she also didn't know how to swim, she was shocked, she couldn't call anybody. she was trying to get Arash.
Arezou was calling mom mom
everybody came out, she pointed at sea. Amir and Ahmad swim, shohre and Sepideh were screaming and crying Arash Arash. After few minutes Arash was on Amir's arms and Ahmad carried Elly.
the real love began, Ahmad was deeply in love and also worried is she alive or not. 
They put both on sands, they both cough, all of them were happy, Sepideh hugged Elly and Arash. Shohre was holding her son and cry. it was breath taking moment.
It was dark. knock knock.
They look at each other. Manouchehr opened the door. Elly was sitting next to Ahmad. Ali walked in. He heard that Elly was with them for Ahmad. He attacked Ahmad. ''Elly screamed, stop it, silly''.
All looked at Elly. ''I don't want you, I never was, Elly said. Now leave me, leave''.
Ali was shamed. He left. 
In a 7th day Ahmad purposed Elly. He hadn't much time, he had to go back to Germany.
One month later, Elly and Ahmad were living happy in Germany.




Belinda Fanfiction

Retribution

Prologue
Glaring at his reflection he thought to himself, "That two timing son of a bitch is gunna die for what he did to Sam. I'm gunna rip out his insides, string 'em up over the fires of hell, and shove 'em down his fucking mouth till he bleeds black and screams for mercy. No, screw that. I'm gunna feed 'em to his mangy little soul stealing, meat suit wearing minions."

Pay back is a bitch.


Earlier
He could hear it before he attempted to open an eye. The deafening sound of silence. Then the overly happy chirping of birds. The ecstatic squeals of children piercing his senses, reminding him of the good times when they were young boys.

It was all so blatantly obvious, but he wasn't ready.

Not yet.

He needed to stay still for a moment longer. Just a little longer. He wasn't entirely too sure what he would see, but when he opened his eyes it would all become real, and he didn't know if he could do that. He didn't know if he was strong enough to face the truth. 


As he lay on the overused motel bed, springs threatening to dig into his side, he slowly became more attuned to his surroundings. The room was beginning to take on a musky odour, having been deprived of fresh air for over a week. The quiet hum of the ice box, and the faint scent of Sams favourite cheap cologne from Wal-Mart hung in the air.

There was no sound of fingers tapping quietly on the laptop, in search of the unexplained. There was no freshly brewed coffee invading his nostrils, accompanied by hot toasted bagels smothered with cream cheese and spoonfuls of sweet strawberry jelly. There was no one assaulting him with pillows, informing him that it was time to get up, clean up and ship out. There was no one to scold him for stumbling back in the early hours of the morning, tossing boots and jeans into a messy pile on the floor before landing in a clumsy heap face down onto the bed. Simply put, there was no Sam.

His arms feel strangely heavy as he raised his hands and rubbed his eyes, preparing for the inevitable. It didn't hurt so much now that the bruises were healing. Sam/Lucifer sure knew how to throw a mean left hook. Running them down his face, he felt the scratch of a course growth, and decided it was time to do what he had been trying in vain to avoid. To face reality.

Laying still he blinked open an eye, and then the other, a faint beam of light peeking through the curtains momentarily blinded him. He had grown accustomed to the dark, so being awake during the day was another reality he had to embrace. Turning his head, he spotted Sams laptop on the table, sitting cold and unused. Jaw ticking, he quickly looked away, but  when they rested on Sams duffel bag he couldn't seem to stop his eyes from watering. Curling his hands into fists, he took deep breaths in an attempt to reel in his emotions. He would give anything right about now just to hear Sam call him a sissy boy.


Empowered with invisible strength, he came to a resolution.

He won't grace the biker bar or the strippers tonight, or any other night. Today was a new beginning, and after taking another glance at Sams duffel bag he awkwardly stood up and grabbed the trashcan. Making his way around the small room he placed the scattered beer bottles into the bin, the dirty laundry tossed onto the unused bed next to his. 

Dragging his feet he made his way to the window and felt a small sense of normalcy, letting the sunlight warm his features when he opened the curtains. It was sweet and inviting, a complete contrast to how he was feeling. Looking out the window he saw children running and playing with the neighborhood dogs. Opening the window he invited the sounds of the outside world into his. A sad smirk crept onto the corner of his mouth.

He thought back to the promise he made to Sam, and god knows he tried to live a normal life if only for a few days. He thought of  Cas, and how big a part he played in the events that lead to Sam being used as Lucifers meat suit. He thought about Bobby and how grateful he was that Cas was able to bring him back to life. But what he wanted more than anything in the whole god for saken world, was his brother. 

The invisible strength he felt earlier was beginning to take hold of him again. From the depths of his soul to the strands of his hair, he was so tired. Tired of hunting, tired of angels and demons, tired of everything. Just plain ole tired of being dicked around. It was time to do things on his terms. Fuck the apocalypse. He was going to break his promise to Sam; he was going to find a way to bring him back. Even if it meant he had to die. Again.

Moving with a renewed purpose he turned away from the window and strode into the bathroom, looking into the mirror.

Glaring at his reflection he thought to himself, "That two timing son of a bitch is gunna die for what he did to Sam. I'm gunna rip out his insides, string 'em up over the fires of hell, and shove 'em down his fucking mouth till he bleeds black and screams for mercy. No screw that, I'm gunna feed 'em to his mangy little soul stealing, meat suit wearing minions."

Payback is a bitch.

A persistent knocking on the motel door drew him out of his thoughts. Sighing heavily he unlatched the chain and turned the lock.

Deans legs buckled beneath him and with a strangled sob he stumbled back.

"Sam?!"


I do not in anyway own Supernatural, I am merely a fan who used Dean and Sam as inspiration for this short piece. 
If you are a follower of the series, you will know that Sam is used by Lucifer as his vessel or 'meat suit'. As much as i wanted to include Chuck into the story (he plays a big part in season 5) I am limited to 1,000 words. This fanfic centres around Dean, and his reaction to Sams absence in his life. It explores the deep bond between brothers, and how the loss of a loved one can either turn you into a bitter twisted man. Or give you strength to finding a solution to making things right again.  I hope you enjoy reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it.

Hee Hyun Lee Fanfiction

I’m big fan of Shutter (2008). It is directed by Masayuki Ochiai

The story of Shutter is A newly married couple discovers disturbing, ghostly images in photographs they develop after a tragic accident. Fearing the manifestations may be connected, they investigate and learn that some mysteries are better left unsolved.
For my Fan Fiction I use same character and make now story of shutter~ the theme is horror.
I hope enjoy my fan fic~
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You made a mistake……..

Character: Ben (Joshua Jackson).

Jane (Rachael Taylor).

Ben is really famous photographer in New York but he hasn’t got much to do so he moves to Japan to looking for the job. When he arrive Japan every thing was new and he was really excited. And He found new job as well so quickly/.

One day…..
After he finishes his work, he meets some friend and nearly 10pm he decide to go home.
Because he drunk some beer, he feel tired and he wants to go for a sleep.
He turns on the radio to get rid of sleep. But suddenly, song keeps stopping and makes strange sounds. “What the… what happen to it? (BANG! BANG!(he use one hand) ) Work! Work! Work !!!!!!” Ben said “stupid radio!”Ben said He looks at the radio and tried to turn it off, but at that time, some thing hit by his car.He suddenly stops his car and look at the back by inside mirror but nothing was there, Ben start to confuse “What? I think I hit something but how come nothing there? Oh well it’s should be bird or some small animals” he didn’t get out of car and checked. He start to drive again. While he driving in the dark road, there was one car follow bens car and keep flicker the light. ”what is problem? Ben said. “Today is such a strange day.!!” First time Ben ignore them, but they keep flickering so Ben Stop his car on the side of the road, get off his car and knock their window “hey ! What is your problem? Ha?” Ben said but suddenly they said to him “are you aright?” “What you mean aright for?” Ben said. “Because when we flickering the light we saw one girl hanging on top of your car” “A what? So you kept flickering because some one hanging on top of my car?? Are you? Drunk? Or crazy?” Ben didn’t believe them and he just ran away from them and got in to his car, “what a Crazy guy I ever seen.”. Ben said.

He arrive his apartment. He is waiting for the lift “ four... three. . come on come on two.. one ding dong” he get in to lift . Press the level 5 and waiting to close. “Stop ~Stop~” he hear a girl shouting to stop the lift. He press open button and wait until she come “thank you” she said “she look gorgeous, blond long wave hair and pretty eyes. Ben feels his heart is bumping really fast. “iiiii ttt’s aright” Ben said. “I’m Jane What your name” she said. “I’m Ben” Ben said. “You are my neighbor I’m live level 5 as well we can be friend ~!” she said, “It’s a good idea! I came from New York so I don’t have many friends” Ben said. “Oh really? Me too I don’t have many friends here.” she said. Ben things she likes him too. It was their first time meeting...

After 1month later they got married.
Ben live very happy life, he have pretty wife and he promoted from his work.
He is photographer so when he works out side to take picture, he always took his wife with him. He have new hobby which is taking picture of his wife secretly because his wife Jane, don’t like two things taking picture and looking at the mirrors... While he enjoying happiness he couldn’t realize what crazy think os coming up……One day... He was busy, because he has important presentation today in his work, he is having a shower “LULU LALA (singing) “Hey Jane can you pass me shaving cream?” Ben said
“Okay hang on~” she open the bathroom door. “Here you go” she said. ”Oh thanks” he passed on and he looked Jane through the mirror. Oh MY God! Ben was shocked, he drops shaving cream. When he turn a round he can see Jane, but he can’t see Jane through the mirror! Ben confusing, his brain going to explode “what is going on what is happening to me?” Ben said. “Knock knock! Honeys are you okay? ” Jane said. “yyyyyeeee…sss I’m okay I’m finished I will be there soon” he quickly finished shower and he came out side the bathroom, he looking for Jane. Jane is in the kitchen, he quietly went in to dark room (photo printing). He looking for the film that he took photo of his wife (secretly). He found it and printing the photo. When it’s dried he looked at it…..”Oh My God Oh My God” he can’t believe what he seeing now. There is no one in the photo” I can’t believe it I think this photo is something wrong I should proof it now~!” he grab Polaroid camera (a camera printing film directly) and went to kitchen. “Jane look at here” when she turn a round he keep pressing the shutter, films are all over the floor nothing on the picture. But the horrible thing is when he press shutter Jane looks different her face became terribly distorted. “Honey what’s wrong” Jane Keep coming towards to Ben, but he afraid so he keep back ward stepping. “Honey you shouldn’t done that..” she Said “You making a mistake.” she keep walking towards to him and staring at him. “Don’t come closer” Ben said. He fell over lie down on the floor, Jane sit on top him and strangle Ben’s neck. “You Makes me to kill you honey, you shouldn’t do what I told you to not to. Bye Ben”

Next day--- News: Famous photographer Ben killed his self in his apartment in Japan.Lot’s of photos are sprits on the floor we couldn’t find the reason why he died………


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Explanation: beginning Ben hit some thing ,At that time Jane was going some where but her car was Brocken down. She needs help so she parks her car side of the road and she standing on the road. She saw one car coming.(It was Ben’s car) so she wave to him to stop but he couldn’t see her because of the radio. Ben actually hit Jane and she die on the road. She hangs on to Ben’s car to go his house. She appears front off him to revenge him…

Friday, August 13, 2010

So-Young's Fan Fiction

I wrote my fanfic about a movie called "If only"
If only was directed from Gilbert Junger in 2004.
(I do not own If Only, I'm just a fan who used Ian and Samantha in my fan fiction.)
I hope you enjoy reading it as this is my first time writing a fan fiction.
This movie had a huge effect on me when Ian woke up on the day of Samantha's graduation concert and Samantha was beside him. but i don't know whether it was Ian's dream or if it was real , so I'm still confused about it but the movie was interesting for me.


No such thing as If

“Let me be thankful that I knew you and loved you to death.
What am I going to do talking about the past, it’s not like I can turn it around.
If sometime when I get to think of you and get sad, I will call your
name and try not to be sad. But I’m still going to love you and think that
I just can’t see you in front of me.”



  Ian woke up the day after the accident and as usual he reached to the other side
of the bed as if Samantha was still beside him, sleeping. But he realized what has
happened yesterday and tried  to open his eyes but it was hard as his eyes were swollen.
He looked around the room and sighed deeply. "Ahh.. what a mess.." thought to himself.
The room was in a big mess and so was Ian. Drink bottles were everywhere and Samantha's picture was all over the place. He closed his eyes but the happening of yesterday kept appearing in his mind. Samantha looking at him, smiling at him and then bang! Car was wrecked and Samantha was covered in blood. "AHHHHH!!!!!!" screamed Ian with full of tears and full of anger as the day was passing by even though Samantha wasn't beside him.

He pulled himself up and just sat there, doing nothing except blaming himself how he wasn’t good enough for her. If he could go back to the  past and change the future, he would,
but it was impossible, unless he could try and build a time machine that anyone couldn’t have. He had some doubts, but thinking of Samantha by his side made him confident.
He would be the happiest man alive if he could see Samantha again. “Yes. I can.” said Ian confidently.

If he was going to build a time machine, he had to start his study based on engineering and dynamics etc. Even though Ian was only concentrating for his studying, it wasn’t easy to master his study. People around him thought he was going crazy and some got scared. But Ian was just fine except he really missed Samantha. After the lecture, he went to the library to study as if the library was his home. One woman named Lina got curious about Ian and walked towards him. “Hi, I’m Lina. I see you are studying dynamics.” “Hi, I’m Ian and Yes, it’s harder than it seems.” said Ian chuckling. “Do you need some help? I have finished that course last year. Where are you up to?” said Lina. Ian was quite disturbed by her but he didn’t wanted to be rude to someone who he has just met. Lina explained how to understand dynamics easily and it was a big help to Ian.

From Lina’s big help, Ian graduated and became a professor in one of the top university and from that day, he started to build the time machine. The machine that is going to take Ian back to the past. “So far, so good!” said Ian. While lecturing students and by building a time machine, time was passing by quickly and finally, he had done it! He had actually built a time machine. “This will be my last day of being a professor.” said Ian to the students. “Why? Are you going somewhere?” said one of the students. Ian started to tell his past story to the students but they didn’t believe it. “But professor, you don’t know whether it will work or not.” “I know it will. Take a photo of me now. In the future, you will see me somewhere.”


And it was time for Ian to go back to the past.

BOOM BOOM POW!
.
.
“What? Have I really done it? What year is it now? What day is it today?”

He turned on the TV and his phone started to ring.

“Hello?”
“Ian! Where are you?”
“Samantha? Is..is that you?”
“Is everything ok? Aren’t you coming to see me?”
“Of course I am! I will be there in 10mins!”
As soon as Ian saw Samantha in her dress for the concert, he hugged her and told her how much he loves her. It was weird for Samantha but she was happy.  After Samantha’s graduation concert, Ian tried not to take the taxi and suggested Samantha to walk and after a few minutes..


BANG!!!    CRASH!!!

“SAMANTHA!!!!!!!” Ian cried out loud.
”This can’t be happening!! We didn’t..!!! We were walking! NoNoNo!!"
He was so sure that he could save Samantha but it wasn’t easy. Ian ran back to the time machine and went back again, to the day of Samantha’s graduation concert. When the concert was over again, he told Samantha to sing for him before they go out. That way, he and Samantha won’t be in the accident. The song was over and it was time for Ian and Samantha to go home, but Ian was afraid to go out. The streets were quiet as usual. No sign of the accident, no screaming.

He was relieved and worried at the same time. Ian and Samantha started walking on the other side of the road just in case but, no luck. Samantha was gone again. Ian kept trying and trying. He tried changing the dates, but it just wouldn’t work, and because of Ian kept going back and forth, the reality equilibrium has broke and the world went crazy. Ian was so angry, but no matter how hard he tries, he realized he can’t change the situation and can’t save Samantha. He decided to make the world turn normal again by going back when he wasn’t born. That way, he won’t remember Samantha and won’t be sad for the rest of his life.

This time, it was his last time using the time machine. He had to stop. Otherwise, the world would be destroyed. He set the time machine to the year that he was born and put it into self destroy mode. If he is lucky and if he starts his life over, maybe the future would change.


BOOM !

Monday, August 9, 2010

Bita's fanfiction

aladdin 
Aladdin, a street rat, is the only person who can enter the cave of wonders and retrieve a magical lamp for the dark Vizier Jafar. Aladdin becomes trapped in the cave with his sidekick, Abu, and accidentally discovers the resident of the lamp. Aladdin develops a relationship with the Genie and uses his wishes to become a prince to chase the affections of Princess Jasmine.this fanfiction is return from aladdin to genie. Aladdin is tankful that he met the genie. I think that was smart to make that poem about Aladdin and Genie.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1275288/1/Genie


Cinderella

Cinderella lost her father when she was a little girl; she was living with her step mother and sisters. Unfortunately they raised her as a servant at home; Cinderella could be one of the richest girls in her city, but the way of her current life, she had no right to speak and 0decision about her life. As far as we know life doesn’t go the same way till end. One day welfare comes through. The king of the country had ceremony to find a beautiful wife for his son. Cinderella couldn’t present in the party as her malevolence step mother and sisters did not take her. Sometimes we can’t interference the destiny. Magically she got into the ball. The prince saw her and became in love with her. Now she is princes of the city and her step mother and sisters are under her order. What goes around comes around. Cinderella was good enough, she won’t make any problem for them as he got power now, and she just left them alone. this fanfiction had awsome shneges to old story to the technology world, it was a up to date strory as I found it.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1257299/1/bCinderella_b_But_Not_Quite


Avatar http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3044814/1/bAvatar_b_VERY_HUMOROUS
I think avatar also was trying to not lose their land; even their weapon weren’t enough but there had belief and brave enough to protect their land and doesn’t let humans come to there and spoil what they had. Maybe humans suitor better life for them but they were happy the way they are and satisfied for what they had. in this fanfiction I liked the humorous dialog made up, as a cake, internet, crazy arguying.


Hancockhttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/4411084/1/I_Still_Love_You
The Hancock was a strong man, who had no background and doesn’t remember what was in past. I think humans have power to do everything, but they have to know where and how to use their power, as humans are the superior of the creature. In the Hancock , was trying to help people but he didn’t know how, rather than helping them he was hurting others, because he was different, he wasn’t from that period of life, he didn’t know how to behave himself, who to behave with children, what is good and what is not. Suddenly he met a man, he could show him the way of life, he lost four years of his life but at the end he became a real hero, which everyone were proud of him. oh god, it was a emotional scene of hancock background, what his friends wife was telling him in the movie, but in fanfiction made it as reall, it touch  my heart.( I still love you).

Taken
Taken movie is breath taken for me; I always remember each scene of it. The responsibility, care, protection, trust. Now days youth thinks, they don’t need to be cared from family, because they are big and clover enough to do things. In taken movie you can see the brave and intelligent father, who is live separate from his family but still his heart bits for each of them. He is still care how is daughter’s life going; he wasn’t agreeing to let her go alone to Paris, because she was happy that way he did. He went to Paris to save his daughter’s life, although he was in danger. So this movie aimed of family value. If something meant to happen, it will. But there should be someone to protect us, we have to think and then move, in this way we can enjoy and be safe.


Jungle boy
mogli was a little boy, wolf found him in a jungle when he was a new borne baby, he grown up they raised him as a animal in jangle, his best friend was a bear, he wasnt wearing close, and he didnt know about human speach sound.  in this article mogli is not alone, and they are living in a tent and the story is complately changed.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3314934/1/bJungle_b_Girl






Lion King
The lion prince was borne in Africa, his uncle tried to kill lion king Mufasa and the prince named Simba, thus he can be a king of jungle. in this fanfiction the jungle and animals transfer to humans, which was clever to writ the story.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2778759/1/The_bLion_b_bKing_b 




Troy
Troy is about two emerging nation being to clash after Paris, Trajan prince, convinces Helen (queen of Sparta),  to leave his husband Menolus and sail with him to Troy. this fanfaction, made a peom abot the story http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2472085/1/bTroy_b_A_Parody\








Snow White and seven Dwaarf's
The simpol story is about the charming princes saved from evil deeds of wicked step mother, the queen, by the seven adorable Dwarfs. I chosen this fan-fiction because it pointed on APPLE which is the part  snow white has been fooled bye her step mother http://www.fanfiction.net/s/534085/1/The_Apple









Alice in Wonderland
In a fairytale about a young girl that gets into the magical world of queens, talking rabbit and mad hatters. However the whole story made in a poem.  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5530307/1/bAlice_b_Poem

Tuesday, August 3, 2010

Hee Hyun, Lee Fanfic .



                                                    my cinderella story

In a far away, long ago kingdom, cinderella is living happily with her mother and father until her mother dies.Cinderella's father remarried a cold, cruel woman who has two daughters , Dizella and Anastasia. when the father dies, cinderella's wicked stepmother turns her into a virtual servant in her own house. across town in the castle, the king demines that his son the prince should fin a suitable bridge and provide him a with a requierd number of grand children. So king invites every eligible maiden in the kingdom to a fancy dress ball, where his son will be choose his bride. cinderella has no suitable party dress for a ball, but her friends the mice, lead by Jaquws and Cus, and the bird made dress,God mother gave her glass shoes and pumkin carriage. cinderella have to return it until midnight..but nearly in the midnight she was hurry so she left one glass shoes in ball ..and later on prince looking for person   and he found cinderella ....
 real character of cinderella is really kind and always bullied by stepsisters and stepmother but in this fanfic cinderellar's character is opposite to real character. really scary. this writter change to horror.
killing people.



                                     The Cure Carrier
In the country nearby London, Don, his wife Alice and a few survivors live hidden in a farmhouse.But one day intected people(Zombies)break in to there house ..Don escape form house but Alice traped. Don was so panic and he didn't help her , he just ran away from the house.Twenty eight weeks after the outbreak that annihilated the population of Great Britain, London is considered safe and the British survivors return under the coordination of the American Army, that keeps the city under permanent surveillance.Tammy(don's daughter) and her younger brother Andy travel back from Spain to live with their father Don in London.
Don heard Alice (his wife)is live, biologist said she has special blood so she bitten by Zombies but did'n infected.Don was feel very sorry to his wife, When he kisses her, he is immediately contaminated, spreading a new epidemic.
in the movies Don's Son has special blood like his mother.This fanfic writter changed story like Andy has special blood and  his not infeceted so he donate the blood and save whole humanity.
                                  
                                    Hunted house of Wax 
 A group of friends on their way to a college football game falls prey to a pair of murderous brothers in an abandoned small town. They discover that the brothers have expanded upon the area's main attraction.. the House of Wax. And created an entire town filled with the wax-coated corpses of unlucky visitors. Now the group must find a way out before they too become permanent exhibits in the House of Wax...  writter wrote the story based on real character and made whole new story. she imagine The Haunted House of Wax was opened in the small Southern town in holloween. 


                                 Jacksonbille hellhole 

On Valentine's Day 20 years before, an explosion of methane gas took the lives of a group of coal miners working in the Hanniger Mine near the small Nova Socia town of Valentine Bluffs. The accident occurred because supervisors left their posts to attend the annual Valentine's Day dance. A year afterward, Harry Warden - the only survivor of the accident - retaliated by killing the two supervisors, and leaving a terrifying warning never to hold another Valentine's Day dance. Now, a group of young adults decides to hold another dance, despite warnings. When a blood-soaked heart arrives at the police station, accompanied by an ominous message, the dance is canceled. But a Valentine party is held in its place... at the coal mine, and it isn't long before the town's young people begin dying violently. It appears Harry Warden has returned to punish those who did not heed his warning..wtitter wrote toms's life. Tom escapes from Harmony and makes it to a neighbouring small town Jacksonville. There, he tries to forget the Harry Warden incident. and he mit woman and she try to help him  with that unknowingly ......



                                               Bring it on All or nothing: Choices

transfer student to a rough high school tries joining the cheer-leading squad and she not only faces off against the head cheerleader, but against her former school in preparation for a cheer-off competition.


Writer add the ending in real story Britney cheer-leading group win the Rihanna TV compotision so they appear in Rihana’s Music video and finished, but the writer add the happening a new school week after the Rihanna’s TV comp.


                                                pranormal activite 2
Katie and her boyfriend Micah have been living together for three years and out of the blue, they are haunted by an entity while they are sleeping. Katie discloses to Micah that she has been haunted since she was eight year-old. The skeptical Micah buys a camera to videotape the paranormal activity in their home during the night. Katie calls Fredrichs, to help them, but he explains that he is specialist in ghosts. However he feels the presence of a fiend and advises the couple to call a friend of his.


The original story is that a couple notice strange things happening in their house.

But In this story - their chihuahua is acting strangely.

The characters are also different - the girl has no name and her boyfriend's name is Freddy.





                                  chop-top/love at war
A group of friends passing through are stalked and hunted down by a deformed killer with a chainsaw in order to sustain his poor family who can only afford to eat what they kill.


Texas Chainsaw Massacre 2 this functions called 'Chop-Top'

Real chacter of saywer is he gets order by old men to kill people. Old men treat him like dog. But in this Fanfic writer changes the sawyer character.

Sawyer was not always a strange man with a plate in his head. In fact, he was completely normal when he went to 'Nam. He even fell in love.



                                      A New World, A New Day
An epic adventure about a global cataclysm that brings an end to the world and tells of the heroic struggle of the survivors.


This fanfic is about After the events of 2012, life is bound to come back to normal. This is a story about the daily life and struggles of people on board all of the 3 known Arks.


                             Hide and Seek
After his wife commits suicide, David Callway and his daughter, Emily, move upstate to find peace and "restart" their lives. But when mysterious and dangerous things start happening, and Emily makes a new friend named Charlie, David and Emily's doctor, Katherine, begin to worry. Now, David and Emily must find a way out of this mess...if they are to survive.In the movie the the father walked in on his wife making out with another guy and went crazy. he killed her and made it look like she killed herself. he had severe multiple personality disorder and tried to get to his daughter as a man called Charlie and in the end played hide and seek with her for her life. Writer worte


hide and seek, an older emily think back on her first meeting with charlie warning huge spoilers rated for mentions of scuicide, murder, and mental illness




                                                                       The baby sitter
Karen Davis is an American Nurse moves to Tokyo and encounter a supernatural spirit who is vengeful and often possesses its victims. A series of horrifying and mysterious deaths start to occur, with the spirit passing its curse onto each victim. Karen must now find away to break this spell, before she becomes its next victim. Writer make a character and make her to experience what happens to real character’s house.


Sixteen year old local japanese girl Megumi gets a job babysitting for her new neighbors, who have just moved into a house with a tragic past. Strange things start to happen and people dissappear. …