I’m big fan of Shutter (2008). It is directed by Masayuki Ochiai
The story of Shutter is A newly married couple discovers disturbing, ghostly images in photographs they develop after a tragic accident. Fearing the manifestations may be connected, they investigate and learn that some mysteries are better left unsolved.
For my Fan Fiction I use same character and make now story of shutter~ the theme is horror.
I hope enjoy my fan fic~
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You made a mistake……..
Character: Ben (Joshua Jackson).
Jane (Rachael Taylor).
Ben is really famous photographer in New York but he hasn’t got much to do so he moves to Japan to looking for the job. When he arrive Japan every thing was new and he was really excited. And He found new job as well so quickly/.
One day…..
After he finishes his work, he meets some friend and nearly 10pm he decide to go home.
Because he drunk some beer, he feel tired and he wants to go for a sleep.
He turns on the radio to get rid of sleep. But suddenly, song keeps stopping and makes strange sounds. “What the… what happen to it? (BANG! BANG!(he use one hand) ) Work! Work! Work !!!!!!” Ben said “stupid radio!”Ben said He looks at the radio and tried to turn it off, but at that time, some thing hit by his car.He suddenly stops his car and look at the back by inside mirror but nothing was there, Ben start to confuse “What? I think I hit something but how come nothing there? Oh well it’s should be bird or some small animals” he didn’t get out of car and checked. He start to drive again. While he driving in the dark road, there was one car follow bens car and keep flicker the light. ”what is problem? Ben said. “Today is such a strange day.!!” First time Ben ignore them, but they keep flickering so Ben Stop his car on the side of the road, get off his car and knock their window “hey ! What is your problem? Ha?” Ben said but suddenly they said to him “are you aright?” “What you mean aright for?” Ben said. “Because when we flickering the light we saw one girl hanging on top of your car” “A what? So you kept flickering because some one hanging on top of my car?? Are you? Drunk? Or crazy?” Ben didn’t believe them and he just ran away from them and got in to his car, “what a Crazy guy I ever seen.”. Ben said.
He arrive his apartment. He is waiting for the lift “ four... three. . come on come on two.. one ding dong” he get in to lift . Press the level 5 and waiting to close. “Stop ~Stop~” he hear a girl shouting to stop the lift. He press open button and wait until she come “thank you” she said “she look gorgeous, blond long wave hair and pretty eyes. Ben feels his heart is bumping really fast. “iiiii ttt’s aright” Ben said. “I’m Jane What your name” she said. “I’m Ben” Ben said. “You are my neighbor I’m live level 5 as well we can be friend ~!” she said, “It’s a good idea! I came from New York so I don’t have many friends” Ben said. “Oh really? Me too I don’t have many friends here.” she said. Ben things she likes him too. It was their first time meeting...
After 1month later they got married.
Ben live very happy life, he have pretty wife and he promoted from his work.
He is photographer so when he works out side to take picture, he always took his wife with him. He have new hobby which is taking picture of his wife secretly because his wife Jane, don’t like two things taking picture and looking at the mirrors... While he enjoying happiness he couldn’t realize what crazy think os coming up……One day... He was busy, because he has important presentation today in his work, he is having a shower “LULU LALA (singing) “Hey Jane can you pass me shaving cream?” Ben said
“Okay hang on~” she open the bathroom door. “Here you go” she said. ”Oh thanks” he passed on and he looked Jane through the mirror. Oh MY God! Ben was shocked, he drops shaving cream. When he turn a round he can see Jane, but he can’t see Jane through the mirror! Ben confusing, his brain going to explode “what is going on what is happening to me?” Ben said. “Knock knock! Honeys are you okay? ” Jane said. “yyyyyeeee…sss I’m okay I’m finished I will be there soon” he quickly finished shower and he came out side the bathroom, he looking for Jane. Jane is in the kitchen, he quietly went in to dark room (photo printing). He looking for the film that he took photo of his wife (secretly). He found it and printing the photo. When it’s dried he looked at it…..”Oh My God Oh My God” he can’t believe what he seeing now. There is no one in the photo” I can’t believe it I think this photo is something wrong I should proof it now~!” he grab Polaroid camera (a camera printing film directly) and went to kitchen. “Jane look at here” when she turn a round he keep pressing the shutter, films are all over the floor nothing on the picture. But the horrible thing is when he press shutter Jane looks different her face became terribly distorted. “Honey what’s wrong” Jane Keep coming towards to Ben, but he afraid so he keep back ward stepping. “Honey you shouldn’t done that..” she Said “You making a mistake.” she keep walking towards to him and staring at him. “Don’t come closer” Ben said. He fell over lie down on the floor, Jane sit on top him and strangle Ben’s neck. “You Makes me to kill you honey, you shouldn’t do what I told you to not to. Bye Ben”
Next day--- News: Famous photographer Ben killed his self in his apartment in Japan.Lot’s of photos are sprits on the floor we couldn’t find the reason why he died………
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Explanation: beginning Ben hit some thing ,At that time Jane was going some where but her car was Brocken down. She needs help so she parks her car side of the road and she standing on the road. She saw one car coming.(It was Ben’s car) so she wave to him to stop but he couldn’t see her because of the radio. Ben actually hit Jane and she die on the road. She hangs on to Ben’s car to go his house. She appears front off him to revenge him…
This was quite a nice piece of writing and had quite a build up, leaving me in suspense to the very end. Although there were one or two grammatical mistakes, it had me imagining myself in Ben's shoes and what I would have done. And I am an avid fan of Shutter myself, great story.
ReplyDeleteHi Hee Hyun, what an awesome story! I have a fondness for the horror genre, and although there are some errors the gist of the story is still clear. I thoroughly enjoyed how you portrayed Jane as the ghost girl in your story, and the scene where he is followed by another car is nicely described.
ReplyDeleteThere were the odd times where you didn't insert a full stop, which seemingly made the sentence appear longer than intended. The other suggestion I would make is to perhaps you could break down the second and last paragraphs as it could make it harder for others to read. In saying that, it really was a well thought out fanfic. Nice job Hee Hyun, aja aja fwighting!
Hi Hee Hyun
ReplyDeleteI liked your story girl, short and clear I could imagine 'Jane' face as you describe her very well , you had some grammatical mistakes, and one or two incorrect words, but it was clear enough to understand and get into the story, If it is your fist time writing a story, well done girl
yo yo ~ hee hyun kkkkk
ReplyDeletewhat a nice story, you have an interesting imagination which i like :) As i like scary and horror stories and movies, i really liked your story especially the part when there was a ghost hanging on the window.
thank you for commenting my fafic.
ReplyDeleteafter i wrote my fanfic I felt I need to improve my grammar.........for the next time~
I will improve more~!!!
thank you!!^^
hello, although there are errors I still really enjoyed the story. Perhaps next time, if possible I may do a fanfic on a Korean horror called Yoga Institute. It is one of my favourite horrors. I've put the link below. ENJOY!!
ReplyDeletehttp://www.asian-horror-movies.com/